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03 September 2007 @ 20:56
Murder on the Dance Floor  
Title: Murder on the Dance Floor
Author: Me, danni1112
Part: Standalone, Songfic
Rating: PG
Pairing: JuddJones
Genre: Smutt (maybe)
Summary: ‘Our moves blow them all away’
Dedications: To the one and only stfoosa, because she wanted me to write this in the first place!!! <3
Disclaimer: I don’t own McFly, but if I did, well….
A/N: I would like to request that since I am one of the many people on this community that likes to write song fics, we have a song fic tag! I don’t know what you think, but personally I think we could use one! Thanks…
A/N2: Chapter 3 of my new fic should be up tomorrow night…
 
 
Murder on the Dance Floor
 
It's murder on the dance floor
But you better not kill the groove
DJ, gonna burn this goddamn house right down

It’s murder on the dance floor. Everyone’s looking at us and we’ve completely taken over the dance floor. As we bump and grind together, we create the atmosphere that the club was missing. Tom and Dougie soon find some club twinks to start dancing with while we annihilate the stage. As we continue to move against each other, we generate so much heat. We’d have burnt the house down if it had gotten any hotter…

Oh, I know I know I know I know I know I know
About your kind
And so and so and so and so and so and so
I'll have to play

Danny, you really know how to make a guy feel special. However, I know that you can’t grasp things easily. I also know that you like to play games in love. Therefore, I’m going to have to play along! I’m going to have to think like you. Even when we’re in bed together moaning each others names…

If you think you're getting away
I will prove you wrong
I'll take you all the way
Boy, just come along
hear me when I say
Hey…

If you think that after 4 years of the same routine, I’m going to let you change it then god help you! We’re sleeping together, as usual, and I’m on top. I can hear you moaning underneath me. I’ve decided that this time we’re going for it; we’re going to go all the way and take our dance to the next level. You better believe it boy, I love you…

It's murder on the dance floor
But you better not kill the groove
Hey, hey
It's murder on the dance floor
But you better not steal the moves
DJ, gonna burn this goddamn house right down

We’re grinding again, but this time on a bed. I’m pushing in and out of you, building up my tempo, and my style. We’re making love like a dance, a steady beat and a masterful style. You better not kill my groove, or we won’t get to our big finale. You better not decide that you want to go on top, steal my moves and then expect me to like it. You better come up with your own moves…

Oh I know I know I know I know I know I know
There may be others
And so and so and so and so and so and so
You'll just have to pray

I know that after a while, we may not last. I know that there were others before me Danny, but I promise you that if you stay with me, I will make it worth while. We’ll have amazing sex and I’ll even teach you some new moves…

If you think you're getting away
I will prove you wrong
I'll take you all the way
Stay another song
I'll blow you all away
Hey

If you think I’m going overboard with the sex thing, then tell me. I just like to think of it as a dance. Graceful yet powerful at the same time. I’ll prove you wrong. I’ll show you that sex with me is the best there is. Just stay for one more song Danny, one more night of magical dancing. I’ll blow your mind with some of my moves…

It's murder on the dance floor
But you better not kill the groove
It's murder on the dance floor
But you better not steal the moves
DJ, gonna burn this goddamn house right down
 
It’s murder on the dance floor. Again we steal the spotlight from the rest. We blow then all away with our fantastic moves. Of course, this time I really do mean dancing and this time, Tom and Dougie are also actually dancing with some club twinks. I love you Danny Jones, our sex should become a chart topper…
 
 
JuddJones Standalone
 
 
Current Location: Home...
Current Mood: creativecreative
Current Music: Mr Brightside - McFly
 
 
 
beckystark06 on 3rd September 2007 20:13 (UTC)
Wow Dan. That was Honsetly Breathtaking.
I Can't Express my Love for this :)

And I totally Agree about the Songfic Tag! :)
Danieldanni1112 on 3rd September 2007 20:15 (UTC)
Woop!!! Thanks Becky!!

Yeh, we defo need one!!! lol

ily x
Sabrinabffimagine on 3rd September 2007 21:59 (UTC)
Loveliness...

Great choice of song ^^

<3
Danieldanni1112 on 4th September 2007 09:30 (UTC)
Hehe, thanks!!!

ily x
kinky jinki the sm town whorejedisnickers on 3rd September 2007 22:48 (UTC)
Last line was amazing, just made me go EEEK!

I loved it, amazing song btw, very good job :]
Danieldanni1112 on 4th September 2007 09:31 (UTC)
Haha, I know! I loved that when I wrote it! lol

Thanks a lot!! :) x
earenya_berylearenya_beryl on 4th September 2007 05:49 (UTC)
Yea it should!

Wow, in between the urge to re-act the video and sing the song at the top of my lungs, I noticed that Characterization for Harry is awesome. Totally You're-not-saying-no-to-me dominance there, and I like it!

And Danny came off as a rather hot ( and if I may say persistent) tease. Lovely that.

This is awesome and thanks for posting.
Danieldanni1112 on 4th September 2007 09:32 (UTC)
Hehe, I know! lol

Haha, I know, I love that song lol

Thanks, I just made the characters fit the song I guess lol

ily xx
~*Star*~: Judd-Jones Hugstar55 on 4th September 2007 11:00 (UTC)
*nods* yes, their sex should become a chart topper. =)

I love me some Junes ficcage! Don't see it much.

love ya
xxx
Danieldanni1112 on 4th September 2007 11:08 (UTC)
Hehe, it should!!! :P

Me too!!

Thanks for commenting Star!
You online??
ily xxx
~*Star*~star55 on 4th September 2007 12:10 (UTC)
I am now =)
Junes is good, they're quite hot together... =P

ily2 xxx
Danieldanni1112 on 4th September 2007 16:31 (UTC)
Aye lass, they are!!!

Not as hot as Pudd is though!!! lol

ily more x
~*Star*~: Harry Snowstar55 on 4th September 2007 23:45 (UTC)
Hmm a bit hotter I'd say =P
harryjuddlvrharryjuddlvr on 4th September 2007 16:19 (UTC)
AAAHHH Judd/Jones!!!!
amazing fic for an amazing pairing!
*gives you gold album* It was a chart topper!
Danieldanni1112 on 4th September 2007 16:31 (UTC)
Haha, thanks m'dear!!!

Hey! That's stealing!! :(

But I'm glad it's from me ;)

ily xxx
laurenfoxy on 5th September 2007 22:09 (UTC)
That was amazing :)
Loved the last line! <3
Danieldanni1112 on 6th September 2007 17:30 (UTC)
Awww, thanks hun!!

ily x
mcflysstargirl on 6th September 2007 16:08 (UTC)
Haha, loved it!
Absolutely :]
x
Danieldanni1112 on 6th September 2007 17:30 (UTC)
Hehe, thanks so much!!!

ily x